Saturday, May 28, 2011

DENTED FENDER

Rolled right up to my shiny car
Would she be my super star?
Burger fries chocolate shake
 “UH, ride with me around the lake?”
She looked at me a bit annoyed,
“I don’t date high school boys!”
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13 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 28, 2011 at 11:08 PM

    Has a hip cadence and humor at the end to tie it all together. Nice work with the prompt

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  2. Kodjo DeynooMay 29, 2011 at 12:24 AM

    lol, funny, liked it

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  3. Brian MillerMay 29, 2011 at 4:01 AM

    oh what a tart, oh well you are probably better off...smiles. enjoyed the rhyme scheme....

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  4. ayalaMay 29, 2011 at 4:45 AM

    Funny and cute!

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  5. UnknownMay 29, 2011 at 4:53 AM

    love it made me giggle ....thank you x

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  6. AnonymousMay 29, 2011 at 5:18 AM

    oh nice - this made me smile...even if it was a bit sad at the end...

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  7. Maude LynnMay 29, 2011 at 6:19 AM

    Love it!

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  8. brenda wMay 29, 2011 at 12:39 PM

    ha ha! Love this one.

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  9. AnonymousMay 29, 2011 at 3:08 PM

    Perfect poem for this photo. Reminds me of....

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  10. Helena WhiteMay 29, 2011 at 8:11 PM

    LOL! nice response challenge!

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  11. gautami tripathyMay 30, 2011 at 9:38 AM

    LOL!

    sky-scrappers

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  12. Steve IsaakJune 2, 2011 at 3:09 PM

    LOL, taut, charming stuff.

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  13. AnonymousJune 8, 2011 at 1:01 PM

    unbeatable humor.

    Check out our potetry potluck week 38 today,
    With Kavita/Olivia starring the show.
    First time participannts feel free to share 1 to 3 old poems or random poems in case you don’t have anything fitting our theme (inspired by a song).
    Come on it nOW.
    We love your talent!
    Hugs
    xoxox

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