what a powerful last line! i was so lost in the story that i didn't even see it coming. great job, great poem...
Great last line!! Slams it home! Clever piece nicely done.
and perhaps i have a bat i will lend you...ack, it was hard up to that point...so really, need the bat? smiles.
ugh, i think that's all i can say at the moment... sufficiently creeped out.
Well written. I love the way the last line sums it up. ;)
what a powerful last line! i was so lost in the story that i didn't even see it coming. great job, great poem...
ReplyDeleteGreat last line!! Slams it home! Clever piece nicely done.
ReplyDeleteand perhaps i have a bat i will lend you...ack, it was hard up to that point...so really, need the bat? smiles.
ReplyDeleteugh, i think that's all i can say at the moment... sufficiently creeped out.
ReplyDeleteWell written. I love the way the last line sums it up. ;)
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